Book Reviews

Book Review: Beckoning of the Gate

by: Benjamin J. Ryan

Recommend (lightly)

Santha Lathagin is a simple girl from a small village. She tends to her goats and wishes for all the whispers behind her back to go away. One day she stumbles upon a key, and her simple life becomes much more complicated. Santha must leave her village and adventure into the unknown for a quest she doesn’t fully understand. Will she make it past the dangers haunting her, or will she fail and doom the world along with her?

Beckoning of the Gate by Benjamin J Ryan is a tale of faeries and adventure. As we follow Santha through her journey, we see what kinds of faeries and magic exist in her world. We come to understand different cultures. We see what dangers are lurking in different parts of the world. The setting and world is one of the most interesting things about this book. It has some very unique concepts when it comes to magic and the mythical creatures that inhabit the world. Though there are many stories that incorporate the fae folk, I haven’t read any other books that have set them up in the way that this book did. It was refreshing and interesting to read about.

In fact, most of the storyline and overall concept of the book is fairly unique. Keys and other basic items can often become something more in fantasy novels, but Ryan uses this concept in a new way. His use of the key in this story feels fresh and new as the events unfold. Plus, as you get closer to the end, the previously presented elements, such as the key and magic, evolve and become something different than expected. Since everything the reader knows is constantly changing and evolving, the story develops into a strong surprising ending. It was interesting to see how everything turned out.

I do wish, however, that this book had a bit more direction to it. Throughout the first seventy percent of the novel, I feel like the characters are just aimlessly doing things. It is stated, in the beginning, that no one really knows what actually needs to be done, and they are hoping that they will eventually be led in the right direction. Unfortunately, that feeling of not having a direction or any idea of what to do affects the story. It would have been a stronger storyline if there had been more of an actual direction or goal to be completed by the characters much earlier on.

I think that aimlessness also contributed to how slow the book felt to read. Though there were some exciting or tense moments, I felt like the book dragged on in many places. There wasn’t any urge to hurry back to the story when I had to put it down and step away. The most interesting events happened at the end, and I wish there had been more of the same energy from the end throughout the entirety of the novel. If our story had a bit more direction to it, there might have been more urgency and excitement to reading the novel.

As for the characters, I honestly didn’t fall in love with them. I can’t say that I highly dislike them, but they also didn’t excite a lot of interest for me. Even the romance was a bit lackluster. It didn’t feel very natural or genuine. Now, there is some explanation on why this is the case in the story, but unfortunately, it still felt a bit lacking.Maybe I just didn’t, personally, connect with the characters or the romance elements. It is possible that other readers might enjoy them. For me, the narration and writing style positioned me, as the reader, a bit too far away from Santha and her companions to truly connect to her and the changes that she undergoes throughout her journey.

In the end, I do think I would lightly recommend this book. I think it does have some good aspects to it, and I think another reader might enjoy some of the parts I thought were slow and not developed enough. A younger reader, maybe between twelve and sixteen, might enjoy it better than an adult reader. If you feel like the plot and concept sounds interesting to you, then I would recommend giving the book a try. If you really need a good connection with the characters or an action based plot line, this novel might not be for you.

Pros:

  • Unique story elements and plot line
  • Interesting world building
  • Strong fantasy elements

Cons:

  • Slow moving story
  • Weak character connection
  • Weak romance development

Recommended for Readers Who Like:

  • Third person point of view
  • Quest based storylines
  • High Fantasy
  • Female main characters
  • Fae/ faeries

Book Details:

  • Published: October 21, 2021
  • Series: The Vayilian Threads
  • Book Number: 1
  • Pages: 453
  • Publisher: Odyssey Books

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