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Book Review: The Dissension Process

by Markus James

Not Recommend
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Jamie has superpowers. They came to her completely unexpectedly, but once she discovered them, her life changed. Now, she looks for others who also have powers in the hopes of absorbing them and using them herself. It’s the only thing keeping her in the here and now instead of wallowing in the sadness of her losses. Unfortunately for Jamie, she finds herself delving deeper and deeper into dangerous situations. If she isn’t careful, she will put herself and the few people she has left in danger.

The Dissension Process by Markus James is a bit of a mixed bag with some good elements that I really enjoyed and some elements that I didn’t care for. It wasn’t what I originally expected based on the description that comes with the book. That being said, it does start off fairly interesting, and it turned out to have a pretty engaging main concept to the story.

I really liked the idea of the superpowers. The book revolves around characters that have discovered some kind of power and have passed into Jamie’s life in some way. There are several battles that include use of multiple powers, and I think James did a good job creating a wide variety of powers and making those battles exciting. Sometimes the characters use their abilities in their everyday life which added to the overall world created in the book. Jamie, being the main character, has a more complex power. She can absorb and effect other people’s abilities. I enjoyed seeing how she engaged with her powers and how it affected her decisions.

Another strong point for this novel is its representation of characters that come from rough childhoods or are seen as the outliers is society. I like how it shows the evolution of each person. Many of the characters demonstrate growth from a point of struggling, so a point of thriving. It is a great message, and the events in the story do show the progression nicely.

I also enjoyed the idea of the different plot lines that were weaved throughout the novel. There are about four different plots that are constantly affecting the story, and Jamie, that get resolved at some point in the book. I like each of the different plots; however, I do feel that the story would have been stronger if there had been one main plot or problem for Jamie to deal with instead of several. The book started strong but lost focus about a third of the way through the book. It made it hard as the reader to understand where the book was going.

As far as the relationships between the characters go, I didn’t really connect with Jamie’s relationship with Jesse. Jesse comes into Jamie’s life midway through the book after giving the reader a few glimpses of him in the beginning. Jamie only knows Jesse for one or two days when she claims to be extremely close to him and his little sister. I don’t really understand how she became so connected to Jesse after only one day especially when James establishes her as someone who doesn’t like socializing with others nor trusts others easily. For me, it seemed unrealistic.

Lastly, the main thing that I didn’t care for in this novel was the point of view. This novel is written in third person omniscient. This means it has an all-knowing narrator that mentions all characters’ thoughts, feelings, and actions instead of focusing on one in particular. I don’t feel like this viewpoint worked for James’s writing style. Instead of being a distanced all-knowing narrator, he wrote the story much closer to the characters and jumped between them at very odd times. I was often confused by which character was the person thinking or feeling things. The worst moments were the switches between characters during fight scenes. I found it very difficult to know who was attacking or being hurt. I would have preferred a more focused narrator for his writing style.

Overall, I would say that this book has potential, but it wasn’t for me. There is a possibility that a younger reader who doesn’t have as much experience reading more sophisticated writing styles could possibly enjoy this book. Maybe another reader might not find the point of view as disorienting. Honestly, I don’t think that this novel is really bad, but I think there are many things that could be improved to make it more enjoyable. If you think that the concept is incising and you might be interested in it, I would say give it a try for a few chapters to see what you think. The book is available on kindle unlimited, so if you have that service, it is easy to give it a try. You will know if it’s for you after a chapter or two. I, personally, am not interested in checking out book two of the series.

Pros:

  • Interesting concept
  • Interesting plot lines
  • Representation of characters with rough backgrounds/ outliers

Cons:

  • Point of View is confusing
  • Book isn’t focused enough with multiple obstacles and plot lines
  • Quick, relationship building that seems unrealistic
  • Didn’t really fall in love with any of the characters

Recommended for Readers Who Like:

  • Third person omniscient
  • Superhero powers
  • Urban fantasy
  • Multiple plot lines
  • Female main characters
  • Young adult series

Book Details:

  • Published: February 16, 2021
  • Series: The Dissension Process
  • Book Number: 1
  • Pages: 418
  • Publisher: Original Decorum Publishing

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